Logo's

Was sketching again yesterday and came up with this, was for a competition but i used it for here, though im not sure if it looks OK or which works so let me know :) 

Wanna see A logo with no chance of winning? Here you go :P. I did this in college for the Yorkshire Opera, which decided to enter it into a logo competition, but I'm planing to make a new one of something else and enter them too. This is a case of, why not.

http://www.graphiccompetitions.com/jump.php?contest=international-logo-design-award-hiiiband-2010